The Thesis

I like that the thesis is meant to help you learn more about something that is a future goal of yours. I do want to hear more about the Culinary Arts though and how researching that as your topic is researching a culture. Be a little more specific with what the Culinary Arts are and why you want to go to that college in the future. Also, tell more about what classes they provide there and just more about the school. Also the thesis is not very clear, like what do you want to know about CIA. Your thesis right now is pretty broad. This is a good start and im interested to see how it unfolds.